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I'm pleased thats your doing well.
 
I have a good time at Florida but also not easy. I have enjoyed days and others.
People they comming and going, thats is the live in Florida. I'm a little bit sad when love people going... take at easy thats is the live...!
To day is not my best day, I'm a little bit sentiment. Today I have a bad feeling. I don't had much sleep. And today was a difficult lesson at the school.
I'm happy to the weekend. I go to go Palm Beach and looking the big Golfplayers.
 



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On Mar 3, 2010, at 3:41 PM,

Hello
 
I'm pleased thats your doing well.
I'm pleased that you are doing well.
 
I have a good time at Florida but also not easy.

in Florida

I
have enjoyed days and others.
I have enjoy some days, but not other days.

People they comming and going, thats is the live in Florida.

People come and go, that's the life in Florida.

I'm a little bit sad when love people going...

I'm a little sad when people that I love leave the school

I'm a bit sad when people that I love go away
take at easy thats is the live...!
Take it easy!  That's life!
To day is not my best day, I'm a little bit sentiment.

Today is not my best day.  I'm a bit sentimental.
Today I have a bad feeling. I don't had much sleep.
I haven't had much sleep
I didn't have much sleep

And today was a difficult lesson at the school.
There was a difficult lesson today at school.

Today was a difficult lesson in my class.
I'm happy to the weekend.
I'm happy about the weekend.
I'm looking forward to the weekend.
I'm looking forward to seeing a lot of golf this weekend.

I go to go Palm Beach and looking the big Golfplayers.
 
I'm going to go to Palm Beach to look at the big golf players
I'm going to see the big golfers